Hey, how's it going, Thunder! I really love the smudge in this piece, but I think you didn't execute the lighting and colors correctly. I think if you would of made it a bit more vibrant, and the lighting less forced, it would of looked 10x better. It just feels like to me, that it's really washed out. The colors look drained.
Still, though. I still give it an 8/10. This would easily be a 10 with more vibrancy. <3